Wait, that was supposed to be FUNNY? Ohhh...
I barely cracked a smile watching this. In fact, I didn't. It's another Mario Parody, woohey. It's just a lod of "OMG HE MISSED THE CASTLE ROFL" crap: and if you want the text to convey a sense of humour, using the grammar of a monkey rolling dice (how is "WFT???" supposed to be funny in any way?) is not the way to go. So work on some slightly decent jokes before you dedicate a vast amount of time to a project like this.
The spriting, however, was good. But hold on: there are about 1,000,000 sprite films on NG! To make a mark you need originality, and this is just an even less humourous Skittles N' Bitz.
But you'll get away with it, seeing as most people on NG just find anything funny... (see, again, Sn'B) But just consider that from an educated sod like me's perspective, you REALLY need to raise the bar.
Now, wait for everyone to click the "Not helpful" button... *sigh*